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S Biro's avatar

Thank you for this.

Your short story cuts a little close to bone. Love it.

I thought I had just finished a 670 word CNF piece...your post prompts me to approach it again...make it better.

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Sarah Curtis's avatar

Enlightening as always, Doug. “Brain fizz.” I’m reading Bernhardt’s Woodcutters right now and it’s very fizzy. “As I sit in my wing chair” is such a funny anaphora. Hope you’re well!

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