Condolences re Vivian Dorsel, another committed, if unknown to many, toiler in the literary vineyards. But what a tease! You are good at getting your character up a tree just as the motor of the chain saw roars to life. I also like your use of the adjective nacreous. Somehow my first association was with nail polish!
I started reading with the expectation that you were going to confess to stealing Finbar from Vivian. Instead, I was so glad and moved to find your tribute to the great and sorely missed Vivian Dorsel. Hey, your story's OK too.
Condolences re Vivian Dorsel, another committed, if unknown to many, toiler in the literary vineyards. But what a tease! You are good at getting your character up a tree just as the motor of the chain saw roars to life. I also like your use of the adjective nacreous. Somehow my first association was with nail polish!
I started reading with the expectation that you were going to confess to stealing Finbar from Vivian. Instead, I was so glad and moved to find your tribute to the great and sorely missed Vivian Dorsel. Hey, your story's OK too.